Tuesday, November 10, 2009

When I cut off my own sons hair

So I'm outside coming from work and when I got home I was relieved to know that I don't have to walk anymore. When I got in the house I seen Joey running down the living room to me saying daddy. But I knew something was going on . And what I here is that My son Byron had got a conk. But I wasn't mad I was disappointed. When I looked at Joetta she looked surprised but also disappointed. So what I did was bring Byron to the bathroom upstairs and I had a talk to him and I made sure I talked to him calm so it could get through his head. It worked and then I went into the mirror cabinet and took out the clippers. And what I did is cut off the first tip of his hair. Then I cut off the next side if his hair which is the left side. Next I took the right side off with my clippers. And then I cut the back off and then I heard Joetta call Kenny and that is when I finally cut him bald once and for all. When he came out the bathroom he was humiliated and he felt the breeze. And he didn't like it I knew it felt weird for him being a so called juvenile delinquent bald and i also wonder how many kids will he stop bullying and will they bully him back. But what i wonder the most is the way Kenny will fell about the baldness of Byron. That is the end of my story.

3 comments:

  1. Proofread for grammatical errors and capitalization!

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  2. you did good ,
    but you wrote Ohdee Shun ! :)
    i Loveyou brother ! <3

    - Stunnah x]

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